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Hi! I'm happy to be reviewing this for "Annette's Anniversary Raffle" Open in new Window.. Remember that this review is all a part of the challenge and it is only my opinion. Please use what you find useful and ignore what you don't. This review is given in love and with respect to you and your writing.

*CheckB* Overall impression and emotional impact: The first paragraph of this blog entry hooked me with the author's statement that she did not want to increase the blogs rating with enhanced phrases.


*CheckY* Grammar, spelling, and mechanics: I found no technical problems.


*CheckR* Suggestions for improvement: My only suggestion is to keep moving forward in 2022.


*CheckG* My favorite parts: The funeral director asking if the family wanted a DNA sample. It made me smile, because I have never heard of a funeral director asking that question.

I also like the definition for dark comedy.


Thank you so much for sharing your writing! It was a pleasure to review you. I genuinely hope you found my comments useful, but feel free to ignore those you didn't.

Good luck with the rest of "Annette's Anniversary Raffle" Open in new Window.! It's not easy, but you can do it! You're already 1 entry closer to the end! *Party* Keep on writing! *NotepadY* *PenB*


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