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Review #4656417
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Wheel of Fortune Open in new Window. [18+]
My blog--I pull a card--if it doesn't speak to me...perhaps it is for you?
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         Review for entry/chapter: "May 1, 2022" Open in new Window.
Review of Wheel of Fortune  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi! I'm happy to be reviewing this for "Annette's Anniversary Raffle" Open in new Window.. Remember that this review is all a part of the challenge and it is only my opinion. Please use what you find useful and ignore what you don't. This review is given in love and with respect to you and your writing.

*CheckB* Overall impression and emotional impact: The description of the tarot educates the reader, who has little or no knowledge of any of the Tarot card decks.


*CheckY* Grammar, spelling, and mechanics: I only technical problem I found was a type, which I mention below.


*CheckR* Suggestions for improvement: In this reference, John !2:3, I suggest making !2 into 12.


*CheckG* My favorite parts: This is my favorite sentence, Spikenard means "light" in Hebrew and is believed to assist in positive, life-giving intent. I like this sentence because it gave information I was unaware of. I did not know anything about spikenard before I read this entry.


Thank you so much for sharing your writing! It was a pleasure to review you. I genuinely hope you found my comments useful, but feel free to ignore those you didn't.

Good luck with the rest of "Annette's Anniversary Raffle" Open in new Window.! It's not easy, but you can do it! You're already 1 entry closer to the end! *Party* Keep on writing! *NotepadY* *PenB*


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