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Promptly Poetry Challenge 2022-23 Open in new Window. [18+]
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         Review for entry/chapter: "The Registrar [Week 1 entry]" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi, Soldier_Mike Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Promptly Poetry Challenge 2022-23" Open in new Window. "The Registrar [Week 1 entry]" Open in new Window. for "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2025-2026)" Open in new Window. Week 1.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, plot, speaker, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The third stanza is my favorite because of the man's answer to the question.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the way it expressed the emotion of love.

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