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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem speaks to climate change and water.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the short lines. They helped to build the anxiety of the poem.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML which makes it easy to read and boosts the presentation.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS


The poem is easy to understand. The topic is one that makes one thinks about their actions and beliefs.
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