Hi, JCosmos , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Invalid Item"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2025-2026)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first line grabs the reader's attention. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace while describing drinks appropriate to the time of day.

Suggestions: I found no technical difficulties.

My favorite part: I like the way each drink is associated with a different time of day.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .