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 Thirty Minutes Open in new Window. [E]
A short, mildly cheesy poem I wrote for my partner.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Impression: This review is for a short poem titled, "Thirty Minutes" an ode to the time to share the love the writer has for their loved one.

*Heart* What I loved: I love this simple but sincere writing that is so beautiful and states the love in simple tones. It is indeed a very cheesy bit of writing but it made me smile and I really enjoyed this expression of love today.

*Leafr* What needs work: Nothing needs work.


*Note1*Final thoughts: What a beautiful bit of poetry to warm a heart on a cold winter morning. Thank you so much for this opportunity to read and review your writing today.

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