Hi, JCosmos , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Invalid Item"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2025-2026)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with there not being any real coffee shops. The rhythm moves the narrative and descriptions forward at a good pace, while keeping my attention focused the change in the coffee shops over the decades.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: My favorite stanza is the pet coffee shops with the cats. I like this stanza because I could visualize the cats rubbing against customer's legs.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it was about coffee shops.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .