Hi, Sumojo , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Out of time"  because I discovered it on the "I Write: Enter the Second Decade"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the salesman's question. The interaction and conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the explanation about the wrong date on the check.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .