First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with the questions. The rhythm moves the narrative, plot, and emotions forward at a good pace while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the questions because they made me think.
Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it made me think about answers to the questions.
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