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| (5.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews ~ Summer Break"  Hey Cinn! It's been a while. I hope this Anniversary review finds you doing fabulous and overflowing with creativity!  Wow! Absolutely love this creepy little narrative poem! You did an excellent job with the rhythm, along with nice word choices. with rotten wood and concrete walls, graffiti clad and old. I sensed the little claws of rats and fetid scents of mold. Great imagery! I could envision each step that I took with you into this mysterious place!  She stamped a square of paper then and placed it in my hand, her fingertips so icy cold, a touch I could not stand. That should have been a sure sign for our character to get the heck out of there. But alas, if she did, this story would not have been told.  The last two stanzas add a lot to the piece and finish the poem nicely! t'is wisdom not the paper that will never leave this room, and learning Truth," she sneered at me, "has sealed you in this tomb." A chill did flood my veins, but then the Truth, it dawned on me: there are worse fates than spending years inside a lib'ary. I look forward to spending more time in your port. Write On! Tracey   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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