Hello Ryan S !

Your poem was featured in my "read & review" area today at Writing.Com. I enjoyed it so I decided to give you a review. I hope you find it encouraging and uplifting.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

You wrote a lovely and lyrical celestial sonnet poem that I enjoyed reading.

You engaged my interest well and kept me reading to the very end.


MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

You have an amazing vocabulary. I enjoyed your use of some unusual and rare words.

Your poem felt like a lovely song with its beautiful rhythm and rhyming.

I really enjoyed your cohesive theme throughout this poem.

I can't even pick a favorite line, because there are so many wonderful ones here in your sonnet poem. I guess the first and last ones stick with me the most, but some in between are really great too.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your poem.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
In the spirit of helpfulness, I'd love to have some suggestions for improvement, but I think it's just right as it is. Well done!

These are just my opinions and suggestions. Feel free to take what serves you and ignore the rest. I really do mean well and wish you every success.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a lovely inspirational poem about love and the cosmos that I enjoyed reading. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your writing with the Writing.Com community!


May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler




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