I like that you didn't go for red. I think red cars are just too showy. The story was an easy and pleasant read. I like the way the title fit so well. It sounds as though it was quite the adventure. I don't know much about cars but can you upgrade it to t twelve volt system? Headlights and wipers are both really important. The difficulties and even dangers of this adventure didn't seem to phase them at all. writing an instant love for an automobile is something I need to practice I have a character that is a car guy who would most likely completely understand this character's instant obsession. Despite the car not being ideal. I hate cars. I have never driven one. I get panic attacks getting into them. This piece opened my eyes to how other people really feel about their cars. It will help me with writing this aspect of my character. For that I think tis story is above par. It got me thinking and feeling through another set of eyes. It has given me ideas on how I can make one of my characters more vibrant. Thank you for sharing.

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