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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings!

This Wonderland entry is amusing on so many levels. I recognized the two quaint 70’s songs you’ve interpolated, and as a music lover I think that’s totally nifty. The font you’ve used is large enough, and the dropcaps are exactly what we need to wade through the list of jurors smoothly.

I love the theme you chose for your jurors: quirky artists! Each with a unique and wacky personality that’s inspired by common art tropes of one kind or another. It draws the list together and prepares for the punchline at the end when none of them show up.

You have written clearly and described everything well, setting enough scene to frame the list and make us turn the page.

May I ask if you’re an artist? Your appreciation for the funny little details is evident.

I really appreciate how much heartfelt effort you’ve poured into this project. It’s amazing how we’re all on this journey together, learning from each other and working at our own pace towards the goal.

Corrections? Suggestions? That’s nearly always the most annoying part of reviewing for me, because so often what I see depends on how tired I happen to be as I’m writing the review. I don’t see a thing here that I’d change. I’m not quite sure I understand the joke about the photographer, Oy Wei Wei; were you thinking about AI as in Artificial Intelligence? Is there any deeper significance to the juror’s name?

An overall enjoyable response to the prompt. Now I must go and prepare my own next entry *Cheshire*

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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