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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Subject: This poem is about the author's cat, Felix. Which conjured memories of the old television show, Felix the Cat. Reading the introduction, you know that Felix rules the household.

Flow: Good flow throughout this piece. Each stanza moved well from one to the next, laying out the story of this cat and his daily escapades.

Structure: It is a rhyming theme throughout. Word choices worked well to keep the flow, rhythms, and rhyme scheme all compatible with the previous stanza.

Overall Impression: Great insights into your cat. Judging by the title alone, the reader knows they will soon discover how Felix rules their owner's life. From judgmental looks to teaching the owner exactly how they want to be scratched, petted, and loved, Felix has no qualms about ensuring his owner satisfies his whims.

Final Thoughts: I liked the character traits you established about this cat from the get-go. It made me smile, imagining the look the author received because Felix's dish was empty. I wondered why you couldn't stroll outside with the cat; perhaps that is alone time for both parties. After the outside adventure, Felix is ready to come home. He's damp, and it makes one wonder just where he had been, or if it was raining outside during his excursion. The author is very happy upon the cat's return, ready to snuggle and hear the purring of their beloved pet.

I did wonder what color your cat was since that was never mentioned. It is the only thing I could point out, as the poem itself was well written.

I see you won an Awardicon for this piece; well-deserved congratulations!




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