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Hi Elizabeth

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Elizabeth's Poetry and Short Story Contest

First Impression: The butterfly and the flower were attractive contributions to the form that highlighted the areas to read. One highlighted what was expected in a different month and the other highlighted to rules.

I did note there are entries that are now listed as invalid, that always disappoints me when authors enter something then make it unviewable.

What needs your attention: I didn't see any punctuation or grammar issues on the forum. I did find it curious since April is national poetry month but the author chose April for short stories.

What part I liked best: IN the messages are pinned remiders of what each entrant should know.
Poems maxed at 40 lines is perfect. Short stories capped at 3000 is also the perfect length.

Overall impression: The forum is presented in an orderly fashion with clear expectations of the entrant. It's colorful and eye appealing. I am disappointed that it is inactive. Maybe this review will inspire the author to open it again.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.


What does the Fox say?????