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*Tulipp* Greetings, iamthetwit! I am reviewing this because I discovered it on Read & Revie. *Smile* I also noticed you are new to Writing.com. Welcome!!! I hope you are enjoying yourself so far. If you have any questions or concerns, please be sure to ask!

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* What I Liked

         *Bulletv* Wow. This is definitely deep. And so well-written.

         *Bulletg* I've always been a rhyming-type, but when I read free-verse such as this, I appreciate it so much. You have a gift for it, at least with this piece.

         *Bulletp* A few of my favorite lines are:

I need a villain
To this story
and
Ignite the novel
Watch it burn
And feel your pain.



*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         I found no typos or other errors. Something you might consider is to uncap the beginning of the lines to give it more of a flowy feel. *Smile*

*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         Excellent!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
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