This is a lovely poem about waiting for Spring, after Winter. It could be seen as a metaphor for looking for the brighter side of things during troubled times.
You speak of various aspects of the season quite effectively. I like how you speak of admiring God's creations during Spring, I think that was my favourite bit.
Suggestions:
1. WritingML - colour, size, font, line-space, center.
2. There's one line in which the word 'time' appears twice, you may consider changing one of them.
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