"Game of Thrones"  "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 



Hi Hope

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: GoT Wonderland extended-cut

Trash covered the landscape entry.

First Impression: Your Dad sounds like my grandfather was. He was a serous hoarder too. When he passed my mother moved everything to her house because she couldn't decide what to do with it. Unfortunately, she passed away in 2022 and my younger sister is dealing with all the crap.

What needs your attention: I didn't note anything that needed changing.

What part I liked best: I liked that you're giving your Dad the option to be involved. Elderly people feel bullied so easily by family. I know my mother tried for a bit with her father and gave up. MY sister tried with my mother but she was overwhelmed. Thankfully, there are a lot of junk collectors willing to go through the stuff and pay fair rate. Unfortunately, there are shady ones too.

Overall impression: Reading your story was like going down memory lane with my family. My grandfather liked to restore cars and there was so many different pieces out there. The story's pacing worked well.

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What does the Fox say????? Good luck in the games.


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