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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello H❀pe! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window..

*Reading* You did a good job with the prompt and made the story just as it stepped out of one of Jane Austin's novels. Well done!

The Title and Description - Perfect title that fits the story well. I would put the word count at the bottom of the story and write a description of the story. I think it would help you draw in more readers to this tale if you had a small blurb of what the story is about.

The Storyline/Plot - The story is written from the prompt that stipulates that the writing should be like it stepped right out of one of Jane Austin's writings. Hope does a wonderful job with this as an aging man must find a bride to bear him a son for his inheritance. He is determined to find a woman who will be the most obliging.

The Characters - You did a good job writing the main character where the reader gets to know him.

The Setting - Good job on writing the descriptions and details needed to ensure that the reader is able to envision each scene as they read.

What I Liked Best - I thought the part where he fell on his knees in thankfulness was entertaining, funny, and well-written.

Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us. I enjoyed it.

*Heart* Tracey

"When you play the game of thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister
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