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Review #4748076
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From My Mind to.... Open in new Window. [GC]
A blog of no uncertain musings. What goes on in my mind is often a source of wonder to me.
by JACE Author Icon
Review by Annette Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: GC | (5.0)
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Hello JACE Author Icon

First impression:

Your GC rated blog already starts out looking slightly deranged with the clock that has lost its arms and deposited them like unruly Mikado sticks at the bottom of its frame.

What works:

Your introduction to your blog and the thoughts that led to you starting this blog are narrated in a fun way. The picture of you on the large rock looks very outdoorsy. In a good way. It shows that you're someone who is out and about as much as sitting down and writing.

What needs work:

The header of the blog says that you are 61 years of age. The blog was taken into use in 2008 and then the header was edited in 2014 to include the information that you were going to join Blog Harbor.
The thing about age is (as much as it's just a number) it changes every year. So, you either have to update it to your now age, or just get rid of that number so that you don't have to deal with it every twelve months.

Final thoughts:

I notice that there was a five year gap in blog post. I remember a time when you were around less. Not necessarily not involved, but more focused on site things like "Writing.Com 101" Open in new Window. and less in fiction. It's nice to see you back in the blog and in GoT.

Annette
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