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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Averren!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

*Bulletg* I enjoyed reading your easy tzaziki recipe.

*Bulletg* Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I found this tzaziki recipe of yours sometime in the past and enjoyed it, but didn't have time to fully read it, never mind review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "August" file. *Smile* ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

*Bulleto* Most of the tzaziki recipes I've read before seemed really complicated (grate, strain and do all kinds of things to the cucumber). Yours seems easy enough for anyone to make. I can even substitute a vegan yogurt ... though finding two pounds of it might be hard. I might start with a quarter batch. But I haven't had good tzaziki in ages so I'm very much looking forward to this! And glad I saved it so I wouldn't forget about it. I especially loved that you picked up this recipe in actual Greece! I expect that I will enjoy it greatly. I'm going to stick the link to it in my menu planner after sending this review.

*Bulleto* I'm glad you and your family enjoy this recipe and I look forward to trying it and thank you for sharing it here.

*Bulleto* I loved that your Greek flag thumbnail picture for this tzaziki recipe of yours is perfect for the item.

*Bulleto* Thank you for serving our country in the United States Air Force! I wondered if they'd accompanied you to Greece?

*Bulleto* I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your tzaziki recipe.

*Bulleto* I wondered if you picked up a gyro recipe while in Greece? If you did and have the link here, please share it. *Smile*


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done! *Clap*

The only improvements I can think of don't have anything to do with the tzaziki recipe itself or your writing. One is to add a picture of the finished tzaziki recipe. The other is to see if there's a "food" genre that you could use instead of "other" as I think that might get you more readers to enjoy your wonderful creation.


CONCLUSION:

*Bulletv* I enjoyed reading your tzaziki recipe and look forward to making it soon.

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experience, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

*Bulletv* Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler





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