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 Foremothers, Blushing All at Once Open in new Window. [E]
the greatest art
by Rick Fix Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM

A tribute to the art of being a sensual woman.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

Sensuality is an art, carried on throughout the ages, yet being a woman implies more - a strength that is unrealized.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "The greatest art so it is whispered appears on the cheeks of the woman who just came," This puts the reader in the moment with the woman, where the reader feels the moment, yet, there is a hint of implied strength here with the verbiage "the greatest art."


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening intrigues the reader in and keeps them reading. The title fits the poem. Visually stimulating and hauntingly honest.

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