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 Deep connections Open in new Window. [E]
A short story about why humans feel the need to belong
by Rani Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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An interesting short story. You have someone, who has had a rough life, where a number of their friends abandoned them in high school. Now, they are talking to a therapist, trying to figure things out. They have a big question - why don't people want to be lonely? Makes one wonder about a lot of things, and hopes that they will be happy.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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