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Greetings, Beacon!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

I'm getting this prepped as Kelly Clarkson's old song I Forgive You is playing, and I can't help thinking about the similarities of theme. Even if you forgive someone for being incapable of loving you properly, it doesn't mean you have to stay with them or continue to allow yourself to be broken. Forgiveness implies moving on, and that usually means without the offending person.

You have stated your feelings clearly and succinctly, seeing the other person for what they are as they fail you again and again in their immaturity. The patterns are obvious and you understand they are unlikely to change. Distance is the healthiest solution.

I would suggest giving this an appropriate title, such as Distance. I like titles as brief as possible... Have you ever noticed how long U2's song titles tend to be?

Other than that, I really appreciate the sentiments here. It's realistic and relatable and heartfelt.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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