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 Resolution of Reimagination Open in new Window. [13+]
Let's face the music about your level of influence. A Dear Me entry/sequel
by Stik to My Own Beat Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Free Folk  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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Hello Stik to My Own Beat

Thank you for taking the time to enter the January 2025 round of the "Dear Me: Official WDC ContestOpen in new Window..

Enclosed please find the following official judges' review, for your consideration.


Positives

This was a well thought-out Dear Me letter. You've clearly put a lot of time into how you're going to go about accomplishing your goals in 2025, and it definitely shows. Nice job!


Suggestions

There were a few parts that felt unclear or a little contradictory, especially as it relates to social media usage. In the third paragraph, you say that you have a "responsibility to [use social media] to make sure fewer of them end up in echo chambers" (and spend the rest of the paragraph discussing how to reach people on Discord and even starting a Substack), but then in the fourth paragraph say, "Since scaling back social media activities gives you a little time back..." which seems somewhat at odds with the paragraph that came before. I think some additional context/clarification is needed.


Overall

Overall, this was a thorough and thought-provoking Dear Me letter. Good work!


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thank you again for entering the contest!

Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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