I think there were a lot of great elements to your letter. I particularly liked the way you turned a positive into a negative with your login streak here on Writing.com; a lot of people get really discouraged when they inevitably miss a day on a daily streak (myself included!), but I thought you did a good job maintaining a positive perspective on that.

I would have loved just a little more context on some of your goals. For example, the one with the part-time job doesn't really detail much about what you're working on or how you're hoping things will go this year beyond "making changes" and "making a difference to children's reading." Some practical insights about how you see that working out (or hope it will work out) would improve the piece.

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this Dear Me entry. Good luck with the effort to cross this one off your list; I remember when I was down to my last one (I think mine was Rhythms & Writing) and how much stress that added to the wait for the judging! Deep breaths!