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Dear Me 2025 Open in new Window. [E]
An argument with myself, almost like an interview..
by Amethyst Angel 💐 Author Icon
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello Amethyst Angel 💐

Thank you for taking the time to enter the January 2025 round of the "Dear Me: Official WDC ContestOpen in new Window..

Enclosed please find the following official judges' review, for your consideration.


Positives

I think you did a good job creating a comprehensive and detailed letter that tackled a lot of different activities that you're planning on participating in. On a personal level, I was also happy to hear that your experience with "Musicology AnthologyOpen in new Window. was so positive! I hope you have the same this year with either that contest again, or with "The BradburyOpen in new Window..


Suggestions

The back-and-forth argument with yourself was an interesting technique, and I'm all for injecting something fresh and unusual into Dear Me entries, but I'm not sure this one entirely worked. It started to feel, to me personally, a little repetitive to read toward the end, and the tone - at times - felt overly self-critical.


Overall

Overall, this was a well-written and thorough Dear Me entry. Nice work!


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thank you again for entering the contest!

Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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