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 The Seasonal Sibling Struggle Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about 2 siblings fighting over power. One of light, the other of dark. Yin and yang
by Mysti Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job with the structure and imagery in this piece. The rhyme scheme was well-suited to the subject matter, and you did a great job writing evocative stanzas. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I really enjoyed reading this piece. Well done!


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