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The Lost Hour Open in new Window. [13+]
They needed to get away for a while, yet some things are inescapable.
by iKïyå§ama-Yay-Nurses! Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Kiya, and happy almost birthday!

This is a beautifully sad and touching story about love, aging and memories. You write stories that are always so alive, crafting relatable characters that feel like real people with hopes, dreams and fears.

As a nurse, I suspect you speak from experience with caring for the elderly. I pray I or my own loved ones never have to go through this.

I can’t think of anything to suggest for correcting or editing, except perhaps an asterisk or three for a scene divider, and center it. Formatting is great, and you’ve done just about everything I can think of to make this a great story… also, my iPad is at 7% *Pthb*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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