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 | Depths unknown  [E] A poem made from a stream of thoughts.  |
| (3.0)  Happy Writing.com Account Anniversary from "Anniversary Reviews" Hi Someone Congratulations on your account anniversary! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.  Positives I think that the structure and the presentation of this piece was really strong, given that it was assembled from stream-of-consciousness source material. The imagery and metaphors were great. Suggestions There were a handful of small technical errors ("nourishment" in the first line should be plural, "Often it seems out of the parents' control", etc.) that did detract from the piece's readability a bit. Overall Overall, I enjoyed the read. Nice work! I hope you've found this review helpful. If so, please consider paying it forward by reviewing the work of another Writing.com author! Respectfully, Jeff "Rating & Reviewing Philosophy"   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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