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 Pop Open in new Window. [E]
The sharp tension before the shot goes off before a race
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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"The waiting is the hardest part," or so the song says. Waiting for something to start tends to fill folks with one feeling or another. Nervousness, hope, excitement, worry - the whole gauntlet of emotions. One waits, and waits, and waits, and then......




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An interesting piece to read.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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