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The Road Home Open in new Window. [ASR]
Henry has to get home. Mother nature has other plans.
by Than Pence Author Icon
Review of The Road Home  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A man tries to get home during a bad storm, as he needs to bring medicine for his children. However, every path he takes is flooded, or otherwise closed off. However, he has to find a way to make it home, for the sake of his child. He soon takes a dangerous risk when the latest road is closed off. Will the risk be worth it? Read to find out.

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