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Two lines; once faded, now gone. Open in new Window. [13+]
I didn't think I wanted you. Not then.
by elisabeth Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought this was a well-written piece that was short but really impactful. The language was eloquent and evocative, and the imagery was vibrant.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a really good job with this piece. Nice work!


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