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 Connected Open in new Window. [E]
A brief poem about the relationship of the leaves to a tree
by timspadoni Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

Nice job on this poem! I really liked the imagery and the structure of this piece, especially how the poem is a shape poem that takes the general form of a tree. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job on this piece. Keep up the good work!


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