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 Live it, love it & enjoy it Open in new Window. [E]
The greatest thing in your life is that you are alive and throbbing right now.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Overall Impression
The optimism expressed here sheds a new light on what life hands us. But it's not true for me. Every morning when I wake, anxiety, with a double x, floods my brain. If that means I'm alive, well, that doesn't mean I'm optimistic and grateful for my life. It means Oh no. Not another day to go wrong.
 I'm alive but, due to circumstances beyond my control, I'm not living.

Clothes that no longer fit make me feel guilty that I'm not exercising. The mess around me doesn't mean I had friends at my house. I have no friends.

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Questions
Has the world started a new trend? Do we now abbreviate you to u? or "you are' to u r? I'd imagine seeing that in a social media post, but not here, where we're all striving to become better writers.

The fact is that there is no chance of another life.!
Choose either a period or an exclamation mark, but not both.

You will never get out of it alive........
Ellipses are restricted to three dots.

For what it's worth...
The title "Live it, Love it, and Enjoy it." needs correction, as indicated here.

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Closing remarks
Nothing I've written is meant to disparage your work. I appreciate the take on finding joy and optimism that overturned depression and feeling miserable.
It's my choice to make a difference for myself. I am responsible for my feelings.

Thank you for your wise words that will inspire people.

Respectfully reviewed by
Nixie
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