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Trapped thoughts
by August Ivy Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job with this poem. The emotions and the imagery com through really clearly and I think the piece was well-presented.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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