\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED ITEMS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4808372
Review #4808372
Viewing a review of:
 
Walking with Dad Open in new Window. [E]
A meditation in motion
by paul e Author Icon
Review of Walking with Dad  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Free Folk  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
*Firework*    Happy Writing.com Account Anniversary from "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window.    *Firework*


Hi paul e

Congratulations on your account anniversary! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion. *Party*


Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I thought you did a great job with the imagery and the structure of the piece. The stanzas were short and concise and allowed the piece to be read in smaller bits and pieces that all complemented one another.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


I hope you've found this review helpful. If so, please consider paying it forward by reviewing the work of another Writing.com author!

Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
"Rating & Reviewing Philosophy" Open in new Window.

Anniversary Reviews email siggie



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4808372