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Review #4808554
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random etchings Open in new Window. [18+]
a place to rest my thoughts
by Rhyssa Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Story 1: paternity test" Open in new Window.
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello Rhyssa

Thank you for taking the time to enter the January 2025 round of the "The Bradbury Contest" Open in new Window..

Enclosed please find the following official judges' review, for your consideration.


Positives

You did a great job developing story and keeping the pacing moving along through dialogue in this story. It was only about 800 words and it read much faster than that. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job on this piece. Nice work!


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thank you again for entering the contest!

Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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