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Review #4808559
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by Angelica Weatherby- Father Day Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Terry and Thunder's Meeting" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Angelica Weatherby- Father Day

Thank you for taking the time to enter the January 2025 round of the "The Bradbury Contest" Open in new Window..

Enclosed please find the following official judges' review, for your consideration.


Positives

I enjoyed the characterization in this story. Terry and Thunder were both fun, intriguing characters that were entertaining to follow along with throughout the narrative.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was a fun read. Nice work!


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thank you again for entering the contest!

Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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