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Thirdite Omen Prophecy Open in new Window. [13+]
What if there was a reason nobody got born on February 3rd.
by Scary Potato Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Scary Potato

Thank you for taking the time to enter the January 2025 round of the "The Bradbury Contest" Open in new Window..

Enclosed please find the following official judges' review, for your consideration.


Positives

I enjoyed the worldbuilding and the setting in this story in particular. The sci-fi elements are worked into the narrative well, without being too distracting or pulling focus from the story.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed the read. Well done!


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thank you again for entering the contest!

Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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