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Dawn Open in new Window. [13+]
War is the question. Peace is the only answer. 500 words.
by Amethyst Angel 💐 Author Icon
Review of Dawn  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Free Folk  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Amethyst Angel 💐

Thank you for taking the time to enter the January 2025 round of the "The Bradbury Contest" Open in new Window..

Enclosed please find the following official judges' review, for your consideration.


Positives

I liked the worldbuilding in this story. You did a great job of packing a lot of setting and narrative into just a few hundred words. Nice job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was a fun read. Nice work! Thanks for entering the contest!


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thank you again for entering the contest!

Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
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