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 Writer's Block Open in new Window. [E]
A fit of writer's block.
by taylianna Author Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job capturing the feeling of wrestling with writer's block. The poem was evocative and clear, with vivid imagery. Well done!


Suggestions

There were a couple of small imperfect rhymes (hand/demands, blank/tanked), and I thought calling it "dear Writer's Block" toward the end of the poem contrasted a bit with the otherwise negative connotations you're eliciting.


Overall

Overall, this was a creative, well-written poem. Nice work!


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