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Beach Fantasy Open in new Window. [13+]
A quick test run to get the creativity flowing. (THIS IS A CHARACTER POV-NOT MY THOUGHTS!)
by 重子若林 Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job with this piece. The detail and description was good, and I like the tone and perspective from the narrator of the story. Nicely done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a solid job with this item. Good job!


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