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 | I met some Cowards  [E] A life event, where I met a few egoistic cowards.  |
| (2.5)  Happy Writing.com Account Anniversary from "Anniversary Reviews" Hi Rohan Congratulations on your account anniversary! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.  Positives I'm impressed by the way you were able to tell a complete story with a beginning, middle, and resolution in only three sentences. That's very impressive, especially considering that you were able to resolve the narrative with a surprising ending. Suggestions I think some more specificity in this piece would help clarity. "A man who talks about promises and other good stuffs" and "couples of balls" and other generic references leave the reader a little confused about what's specifically happening in the story. Overall Overall, I think there's a ton of potential in a micro-fiction story like this, although I think there's an opportunity to add a bit of clarity and polish to really make it stand out. Nice work! I hope you've found this review helpful. If so, please consider paying it forward by reviewing the work of another Writing.com author! Respectfully, Jeff "Rating & Reviewing Philosophy"   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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