It is an ideal chapter that concentrates on the main story without wasting any time.

Suddenly, the narrator lost the phone connection. He couldn't find her again on the phone and on the other social media links. Would she block him from everywhere? He knew that it was impossible. He contacted several people who had intimacy with Katie, but none gave any positive response. Her existence suddenly evaporated from everywhere.The writer created a fantastic mystery link here.

He couldn't find the link, which is missing. What was that? This is the main question.

Suddenly, he got a supernatural clue. But it was unclear. Probably….The chapter ended here, creating a lot of suspense for us for the next chapter.

Errors:

There are a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes. It is over 30. It's huge in number.

Suggestion:

1. Be careful about those mistakes. It hampers the beauty of the story.

2. Continue this fantastic way to build a story steadily.

A bright future is waiting for you.

Keep writing.
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