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 Glitch? Open in new Window. [E]
A professor is not sure if his machine works.
by Hyperiongate Author Icon
Review of Glitch?  Open in new Window.
Review by Cubby Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Cupcakev* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY MONTH FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window.*Cupcakev*


*Cupcakev* Greetings, Hyperiongate! I am reviewing this because I am part of the Anniversary Review Group, and also "The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window., and a few others. *Smile* I noticed you haven't been here for a few months. Hopefully, you'll be back soon!

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you and leave the rest.

*Cupcakev* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* I couldn't help but notice the name Heisenberg right away! My hubby and I are binge-watching Breaking Bad currently (we're in the fourth season) and the main character--Walter White--is also known as Heisenberg in the drug world. So I looked up Heisenberg and discovered that in 1927, a physicist, Werner Heisenberg, proposed the Heisenberg Uncertainty Principle, which I found interesting! And I learned this all because of your Flash Fiction story! (and the fact that I'm watching Breaking Bad, which also made me curious about the name of your cat/dog. *Wink*) I love when that happens. I always feel a good book (or short story) that piques my interest enough to look up more information, is awesome. Good work!
         *Bulletg* Your ending was great. I wasn't expecting that at all!


*Cupcakev* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         I have no suggestions. You've done a nice job with this. Your layout, too, is easy to read through.


*Cupcakev* Final Thoughts

         Again, Happy WDC Anniversary! Hope to see you back in the community here, soon!

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Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby *Cupcakev*


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