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Desire and the Devil Open in new Window. [13+]
Kala and Rua defy the details.
by StephBee Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Free Folk  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello StephBee

Thank you for taking the time to enter the February 2025 round of the "Quotation Inspiration: Official ContestOpen in new Window..

Enclosed please find the following official judges' review, for your consideration.


Positives

I really liked your worldbuilding. The character development and setting were clear and unique, and I thought you had a solid take on the prompt.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this story. You have a solid contest entry here. *Smile*


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thank you again for entering the contest!

Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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