Enclosed please find the following official judges' review, for your consideration.
Positives
I thought you did a good job with this story. The worldbuilding and the character development was solid, and it was well-written and the plot moved along at a brisk pace. Nice work!
Suggestions
No specific suggestions for improvement.
Overall
Overall, I enjoyed reading your entry. Great job!
I hope you've found this review helpful, and thank you again for entering the contest!
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