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 Interview with the Devil Open in new Window. [ASR]
A bit of a joke about that guy. . .
by Weirdone-Back in the games Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
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Hello Weirdone-Back in the games

Thank you for taking the time to enter the February 2025 round of the "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest" Open in new Window..

Enclosed please find the following official judges' review, for your consideration.


Positives

I'll admit, I definitely didn't see this take on the prompt coming. *Laugh* I really love the originality of the premise; it was a clever use of the prompt and definitely one that stands out.


Suggestions

The piece read less like a story and more like a comedic bit or one-note joke. I would have loved to have seen a little more narrative and character development overlaid into the basic structure of the setup and punchline.


Overall

Overall, this was a fast, fun read that I really enjoyed and found quite memorable. Nicely done!


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thank you again for entering the contest!

Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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