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  Listen Open in new Window. [E]
A palindrome poem about how short time is and the practice of just being able to listen
by Kodah Author Icon
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Positives

I really love this poetic form and I think you did a great job with it. You picked good visuals that were easy to reverse in the second half, and the whole thing worked really well.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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