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Positives
I really love this poetic form and I think you did a great job with it. You picked good visuals that were easy to reverse in the second half, and the whole thing worked really well.
Suggestions
No specific suggestions for improvement.
Overall
Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!
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